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  • Writing Enchanted Prose – Questions

    Posted by Dawn Bonanno on August 10, 2020 at 3:20 pm

    For anyone who has worked through enchanted prose, I have a few questions.

    First, when working on assignments for part 1, which requires marking up each K, A, V, does dialogue count as A? Especially in regard to other people talking to the MC. I’m thinking the dialogue is an audial, and the beats/reactions that follow it are visuals?

    Also, how important is it to write the drafting assignments in first person?

    Thanks!

    Dawn

    Ken Marshall replied 6 years, 1 month ago 4 Members · 5 Replies
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  • Monica Zwikstra

    Member
    August 11, 2020 at 1:09 am

    Hi Dawn 🙂 My feeling is yes, dialogue is audio, but i think the idea is what the person is hearing in terms of the setting… the ripple of water over rocks or the wind in the trees. Setting is not just what we see, but what we hear, smell, even feel in relation to all of those things.
    Doing the exercises is important because it trains you to do it naturally … like muscle memory .
    I don’t think it matters whether it’s first person … although first person might cause you to think more like it’s you seeing, hearing, feeling.

    that’s my two cents worth 🙂

    • Dawn Bonanno

      Member
      August 11, 2020 at 1:47 am

      Thanks, Monica.

  • Angela Millsap

    Member
    August 11, 2020 at 1:13 am

    Hi Dawn,

    When I did this assignment, I did treat dialogue as A. And I don’t see why third person wouldn’t work just as well as first person for the drafting assignments. The K A and V are appeals to the reader, not the narrator.

    • Dawn Bonanno

      Member
      August 11, 2020 at 1:47 am

      Thanks, Angela.

  • Ken Marshall

    Member
    August 12, 2020 at 9:03 pm

    +1 on treating dialogue as audio. The nice thing there, too, is dialogue can provide a nice opportunity for K – and thus, the cycles continue!

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